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Re: Loriaths Logs

Postby Xebeth » Sun Aug 16, 2015 9:06 am

Really enjoying these :)
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Postby Flip » Sun Aug 16, 2015 9:10 am

Me too! Great job, Loriath! :)
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Re: Loriaths Logs

Postby Loriath » Sun Aug 16, 2015 9:41 am

Xebeth wrote:Really enjoying these :)

Flip wrote:Me too! Great job, Loriath! :)


Thanks. Will have another one up later today. Might even get two today, depending on my need to write and my *S.O.'s Orders.





* S.O. - Superior Officer aka:Significant Other, or Wife :)
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Re: Loriaths Logs

Postby Jeffers2112 » Sun Aug 16, 2015 9:48 am

Good stuff, I've subscribed...
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Re: Loriaths Logs

Postby Grifs » Sun Aug 16, 2015 10:11 am

Great work as always! Characters seem to be more relatable now. Now that they have their own new set of personality and quirks, when you introduced them to a situation/setting outside piloting. :D

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Re: Loriaths Logs

Postby Loriath » Sun Aug 16, 2015 10:30 am

Grifs wrote:Great work as always! Characters seem to be more relatable now. Now that they have their own new set of personality and quirks, when you introduced them to a situation/setting outside piloting. :D


Oww Harsh. lol But point taken. More character development is coming.

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New Post: Gifts

Postby Loriath » Sun Aug 16, 2015 10:32 am

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Re: Loriaths Logs

Postby Grifs » Sun Aug 16, 2015 10:59 am

Loriath wrote:Oww Harsh. lol But point taken. More character development is coming.


What! I didn't mean it that way! In any case, just write how you want to write and don't let me change your ways; they're good enough in my book either way. Just that I found the characters much easier to relate to (as a human) when you introduced a new character in Family and Colleagues.

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Re: Loriaths Logs

Postby Loriath » Sun Aug 16, 2015 11:15 am

Grifs wrote:What! I didn't mean it that way! In any case, just write how you want to write and don't let me change your ways; they're good enough in my book either way. Just that I found the characters much easier to relate to (as a human) when you introduced a new character in Family and Colleagues.


Thats why I said lol in there. :) Yeah the stories come into my head and I have to get them out into onto the page. It is almost like a compulsion. Unfortunately, the game moves faster than my writing. I am taking notes and putting the ideas down as I a get them. Keep a notebook by the bed now since I have been woken up in the middle of the night with ideas that I don't want to forget.

As far as the other characters, there are more coming. The Galaxy has a lot of people in it, just all in this small little corner.
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New Post: Holding Pattern

Postby Loriath » Wed Aug 19, 2015 5:33 pm

Managed another one, a little longer than the others.

Holding Pattern : https://cmdrloriath.wordpress.com/2015/ ... g-pattern/
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