Flip wrote:Excellent as always, Loriath. And as always, I can't wait for the rest.
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Loriath wrote:Flip wrote:Excellent as always, Loriath. And as always, I can't wait for the rest.
Couple of notes:
Ok, this is getting embarrassing.
Thanks again.
Flip wrote:
Really, it shouldn't be! But if you want I can stop.
Loriath wrote:This one took a little longer due to stupid Migraines. Would rather be hit in the head with a hammer.
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Geopan wrote:
Loved it, despite your headache, you gave a nice humoristic touch to the story with the "Kitty Litter " comments. I couldn't help myself and laughed while reading it.
Although it is not an "action" chapter, it read smoothly to the end.
It kind of made me anxious about the vacation trip they were planning, I can not explain why.
I liked "Station keeping" too, but it felt more like an introduction of things about to come, while keeping the interest up with the Fed involvement in the plot.
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