JohnLuke wrote:Wow...... absolutely amazing story, Boxcar. I agree with the others..... you are a VERY skilled writer! I have to admit..... I teared up when..... well..... you know when.
Incredible work my friend. Sorry it took me so long to make the time to read your amazing story.
Straylight0 wrote:One little thing... the convention is that "When a framing sentence carries on after speech," it doesn't have a new capital letter even if the spoken sentence ended, it's punctuated as you would read it aloud
Straylight0 wrote:Damn good work! Did you have an earlier piece on the main game forums that mentions Red's undercarriage by any chance...?
TorTorden wrote:Darn I need to blow my nose. Must be symptoms of a summer cold showing themselves.
A, cold definitely ...
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