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Re: Loriaths Logs

Postby Flip » Tue Sep 01, 2015 10:47 pm

I also think it's easier to read with that narrower column.
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Re: Loriaths Logs

Postby Dudley » Wed Sep 02, 2015 5:25 am

Gentlemen, shhhh - reading. :)
You know I'm not really an RP type person, - I play the game as a game...but... Recently, using mental references to these writings, has introduced me to another level of enjoyment that can be taken from this game...
Kudos, Loriath and thank you.
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Re: Loriaths Logs

Postby TorTorden » Wed Sep 02, 2015 6:07 am

Loriath wrote:Oh, and as far as you thinking of impending doom, I will just point to Game of Thrones, and say no one is safe, but like GRRM, I am not done yet :roll:


Well if your going that route you should have another 30 more characters and at least two main characters should have been murdered by now 8-)
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Re: Loriaths Logs

Postby Loriath » Wed Sep 02, 2015 6:12 am

Dudley wrote:Gentlemen, shhhh - reading. :)
You know I'm not really an RP type person, - I play the game as a game...but... Recently, using mental references to these writings, has introduced me to another level of enjoyment that can be taken from this game...
Kudos, Loriath and thank you.
Regards
Dudley.


Dudley, you have no idea how much I appreciate your comment. That is the reason I write, well that and to silence the voices in my head :P
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Re: Loriaths Logs

Postby Loriath » Wed Sep 02, 2015 6:13 am

Flip wrote:I also think it's easier to read with that narrower column.


Is the Left Alignment an issue? and how about the responsive design forcing sidebar to the footer (if you use it on Smaller screens)?
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Re: Loriaths Logs

Postby Flip » Wed Sep 02, 2015 6:18 am

It'd look better if the content was centered, but this is not a beauty contest. It's easier to read and that's what matters. :)

As for the responsive design, I don't know. I've only used it in full screen so far.
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Postby Loriath » Thu Sep 03, 2015 5:21 pm

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Re: Loriaths Logs

Postby Flip » Fri Sep 04, 2015 1:16 am

Excellent as usual! And again, can't wait for the rest. :)

Just one little thing I noticed:

I looked it over and it looked like at any other secure memory chip that you could get just about anywhere. “What is it?”
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Re: Loriaths Logs

Postby robfm81 » Fri Sep 04, 2015 4:00 am

Still loving the story - it has made me want to write one in the elite universe. I used to write World of Warcraft and Eve stories years ago.
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Re: Loriaths Logs

Postby Loriath » Fri Sep 04, 2015 6:09 am

Flip wrote:Excellent as usual! And again, can't wait for the rest. :)


Thanks Flip. Fixed it. Glad your enjoying it.

robfm81 wrote:Still loving the story - it has made me want to write one in the elite universe. I used to write World of Warcraft and Eve stories years ago.


That's cool. I wanted to get into Eve years ago, but never did. WoW's universe appeals to me, but button mashing is not my idea of fun, and it seems to be a lot of that. I used to be into SW:TOR till I realized there was more Button Mashing than story. You should write some stuff and post it. I always love reading stories from others.
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