Elite: Dangerous PvE - Mobius

Its been a while, but I managed to get another post out on the new site. Sorry for it taking so long, but with the launch of Commanders Logs and Galactic Tales, as well as moving the site, I got a little side tracked.

Loriaths' Logs - Crucial

Just ... great!!!

Thrilling and exciting this was, can't wait to read him getting his Cobra. (?)

Geopan wrote:Just ... great!!!

Thrilling and exciting this was, can't wait to read him getting his Cobra. (?)

What makes you think he is going to get a Cobra? *he says as he tries to figure out how he can hide his Cobra parked in Azrael at the moment from being seen*

Thank for the kind words. I really appreciate them, and am working on the next chapter of the story. Should be up by the weekend. I am trying to do at least one a week.

Another excellent instalment

Excellent as usual, Loriath. Again, I can’t wait for the next chapter.

A few typos I noted:

I took off the helmet, put on my Flight Jacket and moved to the cargo hatched and unlocked it.

“Your You’re Early Commander. Perfect. And all safe I see.”

He had done it on paper with ink as that meant there was no record of it anywhere else but on the paper which could be totally destroyed if need be. Not entirely sure about that one, but shouldn’t it be “if need was”?

Flip wrote:Excellent as usual, Loriath. Again, I can’t wait for the next chapter.

A few typos I noted:

Fixed them. Thanks.

He had done it on paper with ink as that meant there was no record of it anywhere else but on the paper which could be totally destroyed if need be. Not entirely sure about that one, but shouldn’t it be “if need was”?

I had to look that one up, and "If need be" is correct. You guys keep finding me things to do

Xebeth wrote:Another excellent instalment

Thanks!

Got another post up.

Coffee and Couriers

http://loriath.cmdrslogs.net/coffee-and-couriers/

Loriath wrote:Got another post up.

Coffee and Couriers

http://loriath.cmdrslogs.net/coffee-and-couriers/

Don't do it, it's a setup...

Out of interest, what is a "scow"? Is it short for space cow?

Very good btw

Xebeth wrote:Don't do it, it's a setup...

Out of interest, what is a "scow"? Is it short for space cow?

Very good btw

LOL Thanks



Even sounds like a T7.

Damn!!!

I did not want to read it. I wanted to wait until you have 3-4 chapters in. Now I'll have to wait ...

I am probably ungrateful, but it seemed so short... (ps It was not!)

Nice link - chapter though, after the action peak of last week and the future development.