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New Post: Crucial

Postby Loriath » Sun Oct 11, 2015 1:00 pm

Its been a while, but I managed to get another post out on the new site. Sorry for it taking so long, but with the launch of Commanders Logs and Galactic Tales, as well as moving the site, I got a little side tracked.

Loriaths' Logs - Crucial
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Re: Loriaths Logs

Postby Geopan » Mon Oct 19, 2015 11:09 am

Just ... great!!!

Thrilling and exciting this was, can't wait to read him getting his Cobra. (?)
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Re: Loriaths Logs

Postby Loriath » Mon Oct 19, 2015 4:00 pm

Geopan wrote:Just ... great!!!

Thrilling and exciting this was, can't wait to read him getting his Cobra. (?)


What makes you think he is going to get a Cobra? *he says as he tries to figure out how he can hide his Cobra parked in Azrael at the moment from being seen*

:) Thank for the kind words. I really appreciate them, and am working on the next chapter of the story. Should be up by the weekend. I am trying to do at least one a week.
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Re: Loriaths Logs

Postby Xebeth » Mon Oct 19, 2015 10:16 pm

Another excellent instalment :D
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Re: Loriaths Logs

Postby Flip » Mon Oct 19, 2015 11:26 pm

Excellent as usual, Loriath. Again, I can’t wait for the next chapter. :)

A few typos I noted:

I took off the helmet, put on my Flight Jacket and moved to the cargo hatched and unlocked it.

Your You’re Early Commander. Perfect. And all safe I see.”

He had done it on paper with ink as that meant there was no record of it anywhere else but on the paper which could be totally destroyed if need be. Not entirely sure about that one, but shouldn’t it be “if need was”?
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Re: Loriaths Logs

Postby Loriath » Tue Oct 20, 2015 6:22 am

Flip wrote:Excellent as usual, Loriath. Again, I can’t wait for the next chapter. :)

A few typos I noted:

Fixed them. Thanks.
He had done it on paper with ink as that meant there was no record of it anywhere else but on the paper which could be totally destroyed if need be. Not entirely sure about that one, but shouldn’t it be “if need was”?


I had to look that one up, and "If need be" is correct. You guys keep finding me things to do :)

Xebeth wrote:Another excellent instalment :D


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New Post: Coffee and Couriers

Postby Loriath » Sun Oct 25, 2015 1:12 pm

Got another post up.

Coffee and Couriers

http://loriath.cmdrslogs.net/coffee-and-couriers/
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Re: New Post: Coffee and Couriers

Postby Xebeth » Sun Oct 25, 2015 2:51 pm

Loriath wrote:Got another post up.

Coffee and Couriers

http://loriath.cmdrslogs.net/coffee-and-couriers/


Don't do it, it's a setup... :D

Out of interest, what is a "scow"? Is it short for space cow?

Very good btw
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Re: New Post: Coffee and Couriers

Postby Loriath » Sun Oct 25, 2015 4:09 pm

Xebeth wrote:Don't do it, it's a setup... :D

Out of interest, what is a "scow"? Is it short for space cow?

Very good btw


LOL Thanks

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Even sounds like a T7. :roll:
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Re: Loriaths Logs

Postby Geopan » Mon Oct 26, 2015 10:34 am

Damn!!!

I did not want to read it. I wanted to wait until you have 3-4 chapters in. Now I'll have to wait ...

I am probably ungrateful, but it seemed so short... (ps It was not!)

Nice link - chapter though, after the action peak of last week and the future development.
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