Elite: Dangerous PvE - Mobius

Beautiful !!!

Although I am an action-oriented reader, I enjoyed your writing, and then some.

The one thing that made me feel "strange" reading it, is that I always in my mind substituted 3rd person with a 1st person point of view.
I don't know why I did that. As I said, strange.

It reads well as an introduction to a bigger project, but simultaneously can stand extremely well as a short independent story.

That's why it left me wondering, will there be more?

Thank you, Tord and Ger

There will definitely be more stories of Boxcar and Red, and there are a few already on this forum...I've just been very busy with writing projects that I'm actually getting graded on (yay for higher education!) that I haven't had much time to piece stories together.

Thank you all very much for your interest, though...

...I'm curious...what would people like to read about?

Giving this another edit and a look-over for upcoming additions.

I just read your story tonight and well wow. You know how to convey your characters feelings to the point that you'r readers (read me) get
a big nasty lump in the throat adn watery eyes.. Well written story. Thank you so much for sharing it !

John Snow wrote:I just read your story tonight and well wow. You know how to convey your characters feelings to the point that you'r readers (read me) get
a big nasty lump in the throat adn watery eyes.. Well written story. Thank you so much for sharing it !

I just love making people cry

Thank you, very much For reading and for the kind words.

Boxcar -

I know it was good because it actually brought a tear to my eye. Well done, sir. Well done indeed.