Something to Remember Me By: A not-so-brief history of Boxcar and Red

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Re: Something to Remember Me By: A not-so-brief history of Boxcar and Red

Postby Geopan » Wed Sep 16, 2015 1:49 pm

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Although I am an action-oriented reader, I enjoyed your writing, and then some.

The one thing that made me feel "strange" reading it, is that I always in my mind substituted 3rd person with a 1st person point of view.
I don't know why I did that. As I said, strange.

It reads well as an introduction to a bigger project, but simultaneously can stand extremely well as a short independent story.

That's why it left me wondering, will there be more?
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Re: Something to Remember Me By: A not-so-brief history of Boxcar and Red

Postby UnmarkedBoxcar » Tue Sep 22, 2015 5:02 am

Thank you, Tord and Ger :D

There will definitely be more stories of Boxcar and Red, and there are a few already on this forum...I've just been very busy with writing projects that I'm actually getting graded on (yay for higher education!) that I haven't had much time to piece stories together.

Thank you all very much for your interest, though...

...I'm curious...what would people like to read about?
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Re: Something to Remember Me By: A not-so-brief history of Boxcar and Red

Postby UnmarkedBoxcar » Sat Nov 07, 2015 7:32 am

Giving this another edit and a look-over for upcoming additions.
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Re: Something to Remember Me By: A not-so-brief history of Boxcar and Red

Postby John Snow » Sun Nov 08, 2015 5:46 pm

I just read your story tonight and well wow. You know how to convey your characters feelings to the point that you'r readers (read me) get
a big nasty lump in the throat adn watery eyes.. Well written story. Thank you so much for sharing it !

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Re: Something to Remember Me By: A not-so-brief history of Boxcar and Red

Postby UnmarkedBoxcar » Mon Nov 09, 2015 5:05 am

John Snow wrote:I just read your story tonight and well wow. You know how to convey your characters feelings to the point that you'r readers (read me) get
a big nasty lump in the throat adn watery eyes.. Well written story. Thank you so much for sharing it !


I just love making people cry :evil:

Thank you, very much :) For reading and for the kind words.
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Re: Something to Remember Me By: A not-so-brief history of Boxcar and Red

Postby Crimson » Mon Apr 11, 2016 7:28 pm

Boxcar -

I know it was good because it actually brought a tear to my eye. Well done, sir. Well done indeed.
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