Lase Mooray Story

[smartroad]

Hi all

I have written a bit of a back story for my character in E:D. Rather then wall of text it here it is available on my blog: http://gingerlens.co.uk/edblog/index.ph ... ase-Mooray with an eBook version if anyone is THAT interested and would rather read it elsewhere It is short, only about 2500 words.

Be gentle, its my first go doing something like this

[Loriath]

Good read. Was seeing the battle in my head as I read it.

Thanks for sharing.

[Cmdr Kharma]

Just read it......

Like it......Very good.....

A Few spelling and grammar mistakes.....But what the hell

First attempt......

Keep going........

[Cmdr Kharma]

Good read. Was seeing the battle in my head as I read it.

Thanks for sharing.

Ditto......

[smartroad]

Thanks for the comments

A Few spelling and grammar mistakes.....But what the hell

Could you point them out (maybe in PM ) I have always struggled with spelling and although did spell check but I know its never fool proof To improve its always good to know where

[Cmdr Kharma]

Ok..will do.....

I'll re read tomorrow...As quite drunk at the moment......

[Flip]

Very good!

[Cmdr Kharma]

Thanks for the comments

A Few spelling and grammar mistakes.....But what the hell

Could you point them out (maybe in PM ) I have always struggled with spelling and although did spell check but I know its never fool proof To improve its always good to know where

Ooops forgot about beta launch today......

I have just printed it out and will read it in work tomorrow.....

No doubt when I'm sober it will read fine.....

[Straylight0]

Nice one! If that's a first go, you should go on with this writing thing! Liked the suspense with [SPOILER] the remlock mask and signal.

Could PM you some Grammar Nazi annotations if you like and I can figure PM'ing out?

[Flip]

To PM a user, click on his/her name, then click on "Send private message". You must have posted on the forum a couple of times before to be allowed to send a PM, but since you already have, that shouldn't be a problem for you.