Lase Mooray Story

[smartroad]

Nice one! If that's a first go, you should go on with this writing thing! Liked the suspense with [SPOILER] the remlock mask and signal.

Could PM you some Grammar Nazi annotations if you like and I can figure PM'ing out?

Thank you I am more the happy to accept grammer nazi corrections

[Straylight0]

Had a quick look at the google docs version and replied to the points. By the way, where do you get the cool "pilot's license" type signature thing from?

[smartroad]

Had a quick look at the google docs version and replied to the points. By the way, where do you get the cool "pilot's license" type signature thing from?

Cheers! Having a look now

Re the license you can get it setup on the Inara site (link in the tools at the top of this site )

[smartroad]

Hi all,

I have a cheeky request. I have uploaded my final copy of Lase's story to Smashwords. I was hoping that some of you may find time to read my short story and give some reviews on the site. It is about 2500 words and shouldn't take more than half and hour to read, probably less.

I am taking my first few tentative steps into writing proper so would really value any feedback. The book is free and, thanks to Smashwords, can be downloaded in a variety of formats, even read online.

Here is the link: https://www.smashwords.com/books/view/578755

Thanks for any help you can provide

[Loriath]

Here is the link: https://www.smashwords.com/books/view/578755

Thanks for any help you can provide

Just put it on my kindle, and will read it later. Check your PM's

[smartroad]

Cheers Loriath. If you do add a review be honest, don't feel compelled to give a 5 star review

[Loriath]

Cheers Loriath. If you do add a review be honest, don't feel compelled to give a 5 star review

I promise to rip into it with the same veracity that Kharma attacks Booze on a Saturday night in ED