smartroad wrote:...This video is the longest length I would do, it was to see if I could have enough material to keep talking through most of the game with (hopefully!) interesting facts and history about the game. Most I want to keep to only 10-15 minutes...
GlobusDiablo wrote:But cudos for creating stuff! Share one under 10 and I will definitely give you feedback.
Xebeth wrote:I liked it, good narration with only a couple of awkward pauses (which I'm sure will go with practice), good tone and intonation, with emphasis in the right places.
You have a good voice for narration (unlike mine, I sound like a 14 year old girl with adenoid problems ).
I liked the history bit, which it could have had more of, and it was a bit long, I understand why, but more than 10 mins and most people will not watch them.
Finally, once we'd seen the loading screen once or twice I don't think wee needed to see it again, so some editing wouldn't go a miss.
Other than that, a good job and I look forward too seeing more.
(now stop playing silly games and finish writing the Order history )
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